Production - Documentary draft 2

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This is my second documentary draft after making some large changes.
I now have a new presenter, more suitable locations, more appropriate cutaways and better suited music.
This version is still not completed, however I feel that I have improved the quality of my documentary since my first draft due to me using a better quality camera (iPhone 7 rather than a 6) and my editing is much better as before it was fairly slow, whereas now the pace is much better and the different cutaways I feel work together better.
I have also changed where my extract is from. It is now at the start of the documentary, rather than part of the way through (as seen on my arc in a previous post).