Here is an A3 print out of my double page spread. (it is not as dark as the picture shows)
I decided to ask my target audience for feedback in order to know if they like it or dislike it, and if so what I can do to improve it.
This was some of the feedback I received from my focus group.
Common positives was a good main image. appropriate layout and strong brand identity.
However, common criticisms were:
-the font is too large
-remove white from logos
-extend the lines at the bottom and top of the page
I will take all of these points into consideration and change these elements of my DPS.
I also think I will change the image, which I have embedded in the 6th column, from an image of statistics to my interview with Conservative MP John Whittingdale.
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